Planning Storyboard For My Nike Commercial

I like the way Nike commercials have a meaning to each one that they do. Just like Nike My commercial also has a story behind the cleats. It's about a boy who was using shoes to play instead of putting on cleats and how bas that went for him until he put them on. In the first image you see a boy wearing regular shoes and missing all his shots completely on the keeper. The boy with many try's and fails and many times giving to go get the ball he gives up. After missing all his shots, he sits down wondering why you ball isn't going where he wants it to which you see in image 2. In image two the keeper approaches him trying to see what's going on with him as you see in image 3. The boy asks him "bro what do you think can be the problem." The keeper says to him "it's the shoes man." The boy then says, "you think so." The keeper responds "yeah, let's get you some cleats." After this the boys puts on the cleats as you see in image 4. The boy stomps his foot twice in order to feel how the cleats feel and then say's "let's do this". In image 5 you can see that the boy does not miss a goal anymore, all his shots are going exactly where he wants them too. Also, if you noticed in image 1 the keeper does not have to dive nor react to much because he knows the boy is going to keep missing. As in image 5 the keeper must dive for the ball in order to try and save it, but you cannot make it there in time. In image 6 the boy starts doing tricks and freestyles with the new cleats that he has. The cleats gave him more grip and control over the ball then what the regular shoes did. Also, in image 6 I put a zoomed in picture of the cleats because i want to have a zoomed in image in the commercial and having the parts on the cleats and what they are for around it. I am still deciding where to put it, when the skill moves are in play like in image 6 or right before the kick happens like in image 5.